In no particular order:
- Two sentences in a row (3rd para) you start with "In Addition"
- Your resume is going to be quite obviously enclosed as a cover letter with a resume would be just plain silly. It also will obviously further delineate your skills. Cut that line.
- "I am interested in ...
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- Wed Jan 12, 2005 11:02 am
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Spoke too soon?Scavenger wrote:'Course Safari eliminates 100% of browser hijacks and spyware from web-sites...
- Tue May 04, 2004 7:16 am
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- Wed Apr 28, 2004 6:06 am
- Forum: Ask Kiri
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But say if your a local hero of sorts, you go about ridding the land of evil things and so have a very good align. You come across a humble village of peasant farmers. The inhabitants are all good in their own way, but not as good and virtuous as yourself as they merely look after each other and ...